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INCOME: $35,000
FATHER'S OCCUPATION: (deceased)
MOTHER'S OCCUPATION: clerk
FATHER'S EDUCATIONAL LEVEL: Some high school
MOTHER'S EDUCATIONAL LEVEL: two-year college graduate
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World History | A | A |
English 2 | B | A |
Geometry | B | B |
Chemistry | C | C |
French 2 | B | C |
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US History | B | B |
English 3 | A | A |
Alg.2/Trig | A | A |
Math Anlysis (Hon) | B | A |
Biology(Hon) | B | B |
French 3 | B | B |
Senior Class President
MESA & BSU Vice President/ CSF member 10th&11th
Football Running Back 9th Grade
Basketball Point Guard 9th-11th
Baseball team 9th-12th
City of Richmond Youth Commissioner
WCC USD Public speaker
TECHS tutor
Community Work as researcher
City of Richmond Distinguished Service Award
West Contra Co. Unified School District Award of Recognition
American Chemical Society Award of Recognition
Nat'l Youth Leadership Conference participant
Richmond Rotary Society, sponsored participant
EMPLOYMENT (summers)
Salesman, Richmond Traffic
Project work at Chevron
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Combined | 880 |
I remember when I spoke at a local "School to Career Conference." Here I was
invited to speak on my experiences over the previous summer working at Chevron
Research and Technology in a program called "Project Seed." I spoke about my
job that I had analyzing lubricating oils and how I became one of the key
assets in the laboratory. I had to analyze some of the samples that came from
the oil refinery. My measurements where so accurate that certain oil companies
were requesting that I perform their analysis. I also spoke on how I helped
discover new methods of finding certain elements that were too low to detect on
our machines. This led to visits from oil companies from countries around the
world. They wished to inquire about how my mentor and I were coming up with
these techniques. I can remember all of the lunches that my mentor and I had
with all of these people from other countries to talk about our methods. One
thing that was brought up in every conversation was the fact that it seemed
ironic that a high school student was operating a million dollar machine. And
because of my success my mentor said, cleverly, that I was going to win the
next Nobel Prize.
Also, another time that was most memorable when I spoke was at the National
Youth Leadership Conference in Washington, D.C. I was nominated and sponsored
because I was labeled the most academically outstanding leader in my school.
This conference included young leaders from around the world. The conference
consisted of work groups that constructed the steps of a proposed bill. The
students and I also learned about our Nations Capitol. Moreover, because of my
outstanding leadership potential over the period of the conference, I was
chosen to speak on the House of Representatives' floor. It was the same podium
where the president gives his annual State-of-the-Union Address. I gave some
concluding remarks after a Member of Congress from Connecticut spoke to the
students in the Leadership Conference. Since some of the students from the
other parts of the country, and the world, did not have even one person in
their school that was African-American. This speech compromised the stereotype
with which television had filled the listeners. Throughout the whole conference
I showed them that African-Americans do not resemble the stereotypes that they
have seen on television. It made them look at African-Americans in a whole new
light.
Then I had to deal with death of my father. At the age of fourteen it put me in
a role that had great responsibility --being the "man" of the house. This role
was nothing I had prepared for in my life. I had to get a job in order to
relieve some of the pressure on my mother. I gave every check earned to my
mother to help with the bills. After a while I learned how to overcome this
situation by organizing all of my responsibilities so that I could complete
them all. This included my academic studies and gradually my G.P.A improved.
The whole situation started my high school career off as a rough one. However,
I learned that if one is persistent enough- like my mother- you can get out of
any dire situation.
I had the determination to overcome this situation because I wanted to escape
the norm that almost every African-American male has to deal with. I did not
wallow in self -pity. I did not fall short to fast cash, criminal behavior, or
drug addiction. Instead I struggled to make it. I did not want to be that
pan-handler asking for change at the gas station, all because he or she could
not break out of the cycle that depression can lead to. I wanted to be someone.
So I took the skills I had gained from this situation and applied them to my
academics and extra curricular activities. My experiences growing up in poverty
did not weaken me; instead they helped me develop confidence in my ability to
transcend obstacles. As a result, I am able to handle many situations well and
I try to prove that poverty-stricken people that have disastrous situations in
their lives' can break out of the norm.
In relation to all of my most memorable speaking moments in my life, my
future goals are to become a broadcast journalist so I can continue to dispel
myths about poverty and race. However, I would like to attend U.C. Berkeley and
study communication. The reason I intend to study in this field is because of
an experience I was lucky enough to have in the tenth grade. I was selected out
of 500 teenagers to co-host a show with a Bay Area radio personality on a major
sports network (SportsChannel Pacific) called "Sports in the Classroom." My
objective on this show was to interview professional athletes from a teenager's
point-of-view. I was very successful in doing this because I took advantage of
my age as well as my race. One can conclude the supporting fact that over half
of the players in professional sports are African-American. So, in turn, they
jumped at the chance to talk to a young African-American male, only because of
the fact that they were used to seeing the average sports journalist who was
Caucasian and in his mid-fifties. Because of this I was able to get most of the
shows,' as well as the networks', exclusive interviews.
In conclusion, as you read through this essay, my accomplishments have given
birth to the many qualities and skills that were responsible for all of my
achievements. That is one of the reasons why I chose to attend a university. I
know that from the qualities I have gained, I will be able to take advantage of
all U.C. Berkeley has to offer!
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